my new flyer

[R1cho]

 

[Adz]

Bit late on this & it is getting there :thumbs

Less text

4 pics - i.e. - baby / toddler - wedding - building - pet

Don't print your prices as it will help competition under cut but entice phone calls. :nenau

 

[lacroupade]

Thats a LOT better ! :thumb2

Just two small observations.....your 'costs' are not the same thing as your 'prices'.

secondly, just a weeny bit too much non-colour going on still....play around with, say, putting the lad diagonally opposite the bride amd maybe having the critter in colour?

Other than that, its nearly there.....nice one.

 

[Deleted account DD]

Thats a LOT better ! :thumb2

Just two small observations.....your 'costs' are not the same thing as your 'prices'.

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good point :thumb2 thats cos my mind is on costs at the mo, been trying to get some docs published :doh:doh:doh:doh:doh:doh

 

[Deleted account DD]

Just a thought, would the text be better at the bottom under the photos? :nenau

 

[makeitfit]

Why not do an entry price on your flyer for say £20, but when people ring for that service you tell them that's the Pet portrait price:sly
Then sell up from there:naughty
Also do specialised flyers for as above, PETS, and stick them in your local vets and pet food shops etc.
Then do one for custom car clubs etc. you get the drift:thumbs
Digitising old videos of weddings etc

 

[lacroupade]

Why not do an entry price on your flyer for say £20, but when people ring for that service you tell them that's the Pet portrait price:sly
Then sell up from there:naughty
Also do specialised flyers for as above, PETS, and stick them in your local vets and pet food shops etc.
Then do one for custom car clubs etc. you get the drift:thumbs
Digitising old videos of weddings etc

...and porn. Don't forget porn.

or errrr...."modelling portfolios" I think they are often euphemistically called :augie

 

[R1cho]

 

[makeitfit]

The bottom left pic needs some crows flying about :lol

 

[briggie]

wheres the porn piccies ? :sly:naughty

 

[R1cho]

The bottom left pic needs some crows flying about :lol

or maybe this

lol

 

[makeitfit]

or maybe this

lol

Nice :lol
Print it :thumbs

 

[R1cho]

Nice :lol
Print it :thumbs

might look a tad unprofessional :lol

 

[lacroupade]

Nice :lol
Print it :thumbs

Not yet!

1. Its 'family run' not 'family ran'.

2. First sentence you've said 'very best' twice. Suggest you say something like 'to produce perfect photographs every time'?

In my past life I used to produce proposal documents for deals worth ten of millions and I learned very quickly that you can write extremely competent documents that get ignored because they are poorly spelt or presented. Conversely, the biggest load of bullsh1t looks good when properly spelt and formatted.

So time and trouble at this stage will always pay dividends.

PS what about some kind of guarantee? If they are unhappy you either refund or shoot again? But of course they get no prints until they approve proofs....?

 

[makeitfit]

I meant print the bat not the flyer:augie

 

[R1cho]

better? :nenau

 

[Adz]

Looks good but can or should you leave the prices out :nenau

 

[briggie]

wheres the porno pics ? :naughty

 

[R1cho]

Looks good but can or should you leave the prices out :nenau

i think its better to have the price there, that way people know what it costs, saves them phoneing my 0800 number costing me money just for them to say no lol

 

[Adz]

i think its better to have the price there, that way people know what it costs, saves them phoneing my 0800 number costing me money just for them to say no lol

Yeah that makes sense :thumbs

Is it a CALLSURE or BT 0800 number